The maps below show Hunderstone town at present and a proposed plan for it. Agree or disagree ?

Given are the two maps that illustrate a number of proposed changes that are going to take place in Hunderstone

town

in the future.

Overall

, the

town

will be completely transformed after the construction of several facilities. At present, there is a railway in the middle of the

town

dividing it into two parts. On the left-hand side of the plan, there is an airfield which is alongside an A2

way

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was

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located in the west of the

town

this

airfield, a roundabout is connected with the

town

centre

by another A2

road

, between them, there is a gas station on the railway. The

town

centre

is surrounded by a build-up area ring

road

, which is in the east of the

town

. As can be seen from the

second

picture, the most notable change that will take in Hunderstone is the construction of a new A4

road

at the bottom of the plan.

This

road

is going to be built to link the

centre

with the west area of the

town

Besides

, a big roundabout

to the old gas station

also

will be constructed in the middle of the

town

Moreover

, the old airfield is going to be demolished to make way for a new industrial estate.

Finally

, a highway will be erected from the

town

centre

to the vicinity of the

town

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