a museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpiad work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work.

#museum #home #people #unpiad #work #director

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apply for the unpaid part-time opportunity which was advertised on the museum's telegram channel a week ago. First and foremost I have to express that it would be my honour if I could be able to cooperate with the museum voluntarily which is in my field of interest.

Second,

It is worth mentioning that I have a two-year experience working at Natali Museum five years ago

therefore

, I can claim that familiarity with the tasks over there and my eagerness are my privileges in

this

regard. Ultimately, As I assume it is every individual's responsibility to aid museums in order to stand still and be shown to people all around the world, I am enthusiastically prepared to allocate some of my time to work freely for

this

section. Thank you for considering my request and I hope I will be able to initiate cooperation soon. yours faithfully, Ebrahimi Keyhan

Submitted by keyhan454 on Thu Apr 04 2024

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

coherence cohesion

Maintain a clear structure with introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion for clarity and effectiveness.

task achievement

Use varied sentence structures and vocabulary to enhance your expression.

general

Carefully proofread your letter for minor errors to ensure it is as polished as possible.

structure

You effectively introduced your purpose for writing in the opening.

content

Your enthusiasm and past experience were clearly communicated.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

155 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
(VMN)Scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others believe that education will not work. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
As excessive consuming fast food is considered to adversely affect to the human health, whether this concern can be tackled by the education is a recent debation.From the author's prospective, the strength of educating is noticeable but not sufficient to limit the trouble, due to the individual's awareness and their harsh schedules.
<4
band
Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Governments spend a lot of money on researches about the space. Many people oppose this as they say it is waste of money, they believe this money could be used for far more important things that space exploration. In this essay, I will discuss this view and give reasons why I agree with this view.
5
band
Some people think that all entertainment TV programme should educate people about the importance of social issue. To what extent do your agree or disagree.
Some people believe that all TV stations can only be allowed to display TV programme for educating people about how essential to be aware of social issue. Even though to some extend that is needed action to increase people's awareness about the issue. But in my opinion, I disagree to that notion for two main reasons. This essay will give elaboration of disagrement to that opinion.
5
band
In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?
In today’s world, more and more people who graduate with high qualifications now become unemployed. In my opinion, the reasons for this situation are the lack of work-related skills and the high expectation in these adults and the solution is to add more soft skill courses into universities’ curriculum.
7
band
You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter: ###say which points in the article you agree with ###explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres ###offer to give guided tour of your town to the writer of the article
I am writing this letter to that you published Mr Cooked's article in your newspaper, which described town centres across Srilanka. Moreover, Mr Cooked explained the article very extensively about the influx of visitors, History and its architecture, as a professor of history I agree with you on some opinions and the way you described the details of towns.

a museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpiad work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

(VMN)Scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others believe that education will not work. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Some people think that all entertainment TV programme should educate people about the importance of social issue. To what extent do your agree or disagree.

In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?