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Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Aeroplane companies provide seats at varying prices. Some
people
 prefer to buy expensive
flight
 tickets for high-quality trips, while some purchase cheap
flight
 tickets to save up money. But recently, some
people
 suggested that cheap
air
flight
 should be banned because it causes
air
 pollution and other health hazards. In my perspective, cheap
air
flight
 should not be banned as it provides opportunities for low-income
people
 to take
flight
. Believe it or not, cheap
flights
 actually contribute to global tourism. Because of its lower price compare to other
flight
 tickets, middle-class families can
travel
 to other countries for holidays, business trips, or visiting families.
Moreover
, a plethora of time can be saved through time flexible and cheap
travel
.
This
 has significantly improved
people
’s freedom to visit different places. On top of that, the tourism industry has been able to attract global tourists owing to the fact that
people
 can afford
air
travel
 these days.
On the contrary
, many
people
 consider the cheap and frequent
air
travel
 a key factor for the environmental damages and
hence
 they opine that these sorts of economic flyings should be banned. Their main concern is the number of aeroplanes flying every day to different destinations and the amount of pollution they are causing to the environment. From the environmental point of view, a single
flight
 emits a huge amount of Carbon dioxide which is the main reason for the greenhouse effect. No doubt the economy
flights
 give some freedom and luxury to the passengers, but the negative impacts of these cheap
flights
 have been colossal. Considering both viewpoints and arguments, I would like to state that, in
this
 modern era we cannot ban cheap
air
flights
 as it has already become part of global tourism, trade and economy.
However
, we must continue research to find an alternative fuel for the aeroplanes to reduce the CO2 emission from each
flight
. Scientific research brings us wonderful results and countries should work together to find out an effective solution to
this
 problem.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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