Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged .Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more more useful adult's. Discuss both these views and give your opinion
While some persons advocate that youngsters should be motivated to compete amongst themselves,others argue that, for young ones to become adults who are useful, co-operation should be encouraged rather than competition.
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essay will discuss both aspects of the discussion and provide my opinion with a reasonable conclusion.
Admittedly, some people feel that infants should be persuaded to compete within themselves in order for each of them to thrive. Some toddlers do not feel Linking Words
encourage
to succeed until they see their peers become successful Change the verb form
encouraged
hence
encouraging Linking Words
children
to be in competition amongst themselves will help them Use synonyms
excell
in their Correct your spelling
excel
endeavors
.Change the spelling
endeavours
For example
,In my experience as a teacher in primary school ,Linking Words
children
who were not performing well in their academics became one of the best pupils when prizes were being given for best students in various subjects.
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Nonetheless
, making Linking Words
children
adults who will eventually become useful is the profound benefit of teaching them to co-operate with themselves because they learn from one another and I agree.When Use synonyms
children
are educated on co-operating together, they tend to exchange and adopt useful ideas while dropping Use synonyms
idealogies
that will not make them succeed.Correct your spelling
ideologies
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will have positive impacts on the ones that are not doing well in their endeavours thereby causing them to flourish so as to become useful for themselves in the future.Linking Words
For instance
, a child who was known for failure could become successful as long as his peers form Linking Words
alliance
with him.
To conclude, Add an article
an alliance
although
encouraging Linking Words
competiton
among adolescents could help them Correct your spelling
competition
excell
,it is my firm conviction that educating them to become Correct your spelling
excel
co-operative
with their peers has far more reaching advantage on their future because they have the tendency to exchange and adopt Correct your spelling
cooperative
idealogies
that will help themCorrect your spelling
ideologies
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite