Some people believed that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Decision making is pivotal in one's life when issues emerge or several options are outlined to make a
choice
. Recently certain individuals think human beings are faced with numerous alternatives. I strongly agree because of
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technology and privileges to explore. On one hand, the expansion in technology has brought about many developments over the recent years ranging from household items like washing
machine
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machines
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,
dish
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dishwasher
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washer
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washers
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, vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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and so on to different gadgets like cell phones,
laptop
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and the likes.
Moreover
, due to
availability
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of
these equipment
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, people are being propelled to make
preference
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on their
choice
of products.
Hence
makes life easier and better.
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, according to
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conducted by the
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of Nigeria in 2019, a vast majority of
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individuals
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attest to how they make the right
choice
from the display of different gadgets both online and
stores
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.
In contrast
, opponents of those who state that there is always
avenue
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for adults to decide on what they
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opine that
such
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scenarios
would actually result
to
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being indecisive and
consequently
leading to opting
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choice
,
thus
producing poor
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.
However
, there is
possibility
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the possibility
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of choosing right when presented with
alot
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a lot
of options.
Furthermore
, it definitely would enhance the brain box of the person by thinking smart and picking right.
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,
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by
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of Paediatric Doctors says that 45% of children are critical thinkers and smart when exposed to several things to explore and make
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a decision
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decision
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. To conclude,
choice making
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is part of our daily routines. While some argue it may make one indecisive, I propose it enhance
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the sense
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of reasoning, improves life both personally and the society at large.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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