In the future,nobody will buy Printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

As time goes on, Newspapers will be outdated as every information individuals will need will be made accessible online at zero expense. I believe
this
will occur as the world is fast becoming a global village with easier
accessibility
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to
internet
space
. As the
Internet
space
is fast becoming a learning aid, several
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pieces of informations
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informations
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on books and publishing articles with
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different
perspective
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are being posted on
this
platform.Many books and articles have limited ideas concerning a subject matter.
Hence
leading to one having a stereotype
believe
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.
For example
,
i
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read a food menu book on how to prepare my local delicacy (afang soup) and followed that method of
the
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soup preparation, not until
i
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saw a different description and preparational method on the
Internet
which gave me more options on the different methods
these delicacy
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could be prepared now.
Moreover
,
Internet
books and articles
comes
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in soft
copy
, and as
such
made it easier to move around in flash drives,on phones and on
ipads
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pads
which nearly never consume
space
than a hard
copy
which takes up a lot of
space
.
For instance
,
i
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got
glued-up
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to a book
i
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was reading "The Smart Money woman" ,
i
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had both
hard
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copy
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as well as a soft
copy
. At times, when
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have to leave the house with no interest
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going along with
an extra luggage
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, just my phone will do as I'll get to access
this
book with ease. In conclusion,In a short while, every information and article one will need will be made accessible online at ease as
this
will provide individuals with a variety of
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as well as convenience while accessing them when needed.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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