The protection of environment is one of the most important issues in the world today. But Government are not doing enough about it to what extent do you think that individual can I help to protect the environment?

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There are several issues are going on in
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modern era but the most important issue in the world today is
environment
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and word
environment
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comes with Air,water and
sound
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and because of development
environment
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is affected day by day and individuals and government can take some attention towards these problems and there are several methods to solve these factors One of the reasons for the protection of the
environment
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is to make
Industries
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far from the cities and at the infertile land which is in no use of agriculture sector because if Industry is established at the fertile land
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trees and farms have to be cleared which can
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be seen as deforestation by
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factor
environment
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is
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affected and the discharge of harmful chemical gas direct to the atmosphere and discharge of chemical acidic liquid sources in water directly can
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be harmful to aquatic animals and can make rase to water
pollution
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and to prevent these factors government should put a restriction or penalty to
Industries
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at their discharge the chemical in a position that may cause less damage to the
environment
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less excretion of harmful chemicals from sugar mills, automobile
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,glass factories and the
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reason which I'm going to tell in
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paragraph is about
sound
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pollution
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which is
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a big
environment
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issue
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Moreover
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the
sound
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pollution
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is
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the big issue of the
environment
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which gave rise to damaging the
environment
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and it is by advance and large machinery used in
industries
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or research institutes which can make the
environment
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polluted as a
sound
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made by these devices and different examples of
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pollution
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are heavy exhausts in car and bikes and muscular machines which make more
sound
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in
industries
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In conclusion, the
environment
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is only protected by paying some attention to these problems by both government and individuals by making their desire completed by less harm to the
environment
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.
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