Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Majority of the time,
advertisement
has caught our eyes and persuaded us into buying the products. While some
people
said that it is becoming more common and that we had lost
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in.
However
, I still agree that if an
advertisement
has been done creatively and stood out from others, it will still serve their goal effectively. While there are many types of
advertisement
, in the past, it was
structed
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to television or newspaper only. But now with the
rises
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of social
media
, many businesses have switched their
advertisement
to
online
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platform
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platforms
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.
For instance
, you would see the crowd gathering at one restaurant, after it
get
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a promotion from
famous
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influencer on Facebook or YouTube. As these influencers build up the hype for
people
.
On the other hand
, while businesses have changed their approach to promoting their services online, social
media
users might feel tired
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seeing the same post repeatedly, especially if they do not have
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interests
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in that service in the
first
place. Making them just slide through their new feeds and stop caring about
new
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promotion
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. From my perspective, as an active social
media
user, I’ve seen many strategies that companies use to develop
a
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creative
advertisement
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to prevent their ads from being repetitive and boring. To illustrate, “GQ” company promotes its new bacteria-free shirt, the approach GQ took was making an ad that was 10 minutes long, almost a short film length. While doing so, Spark the curiosity in
people
making them urge to finish the whole video to know what
this
is about, In doing so, they are being fed the product information already. The CEO
also
said that after the launch,
sale
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numbers were boosted significantly. To summarize, utilizing social
media
platform
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to launch
advertisement
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has proven to be a great strategy to reach lots of
people
.
However
,
instead
of being repetitive and boring, the ad has to stand out from others.
Otherwise
,
people
will feel
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by
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advertisements
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on the internet and stop caring about them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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