Youngsters have lots of problems but their problems are often ignored by the people running the country. Give solution to the problems faced by young generation.

The majority of a person who will be running the

country

in the nearly future is

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adolescence

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in the present day. Undeniable that

youngster

is more likely intelligence than older people. In my

oppinion

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opinion

, The government should designate a way to gather all of the youth's ideas and pull them up to collaborate with an adult.

Hence

, the following essay is an explanation of my solution for breaking the barrier. In some

country

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, People who are empowered to determine a policy of

country

still thinking that the only one

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responsibility of

youngster

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is learning at school which is

ancient

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idea, Even though the new generation is capable to do the right thing equivalent to an adult

such

as a

youngster

should be involved to consider in education policy or offering their ideas at least.

Furthermore

, Proving a stage for an argument in a relevant issue to a

youngster

which there could be held by the government.

for instance

, a student could

be involve

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discussion

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about

rule

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of student's uniform that wearing a student's uniform when they are at school is still necessary clothes or not

becuase

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because

their parents have to buy new uniform for their child in each a

couple

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years,

Consequently

, a family must be responsible for inessential living costs.

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, there are several methods to make an involvement between empower people and new generation depend on

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prioritized social issues by a government.

However

,

this

essay definitely offers a way to collaborate with them in order to correctly develop the

country

through the intense competition era.