Some people say that having a lot of TV channels is good, while others argue that it reduces the quality of programs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

At present, the number of

TV

channels

is increasing with the speed of

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light. While some citizens believe

this

is a positive trend, the other half denies the statement. Personally, I concur with the

second

opinion, since more

TV

channels

leads

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to unqualified

programs

airing in them.

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essay will examine both views in detail. The interests of the residents differ. If there are a lot of

channels

, people will find their amusing personal topics.

Therefore

, the population will watch certain

programs

and actually enjoy them. There are very distinct subjects

such

as nature, discovery, art, reality shows and etc., and only several

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of

channels

cannot carry them all, which means there will be enlargement of

TV

programs

naturally.

In addition

, the expansion of options

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not the direct

reasons

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the change in their quality.

On the other hand

, the more people consume these television

programs

, the more “cheap

channels

” will appear. It is definitely the quality over the quantity. In the past, people were just offered a few

channels

and it was sufficient to please citizens’ desires.

However

, nowadays, the massive flow of information

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TV

is negatively affecting

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the state of the shows. Creators are only engaged in the demonstration of their products and getting views, but not on the purpose and on the scenario of their project.

For example

, there is a channel that displays kitchen tools that are believed to be “life-saving”,

however

, in fact, these are just useless stuff that snatches the money out of pockets. In conclusion, even though the increase in the

TV

channels

can give a wide range of options, it will eventually erase the quality of the

programs

. From my perspective, the cheaply produced

programs

are not beneficial in any way

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but affects us more in a

badly

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manner.