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As the population of the world is growing very quickly, the only long-term solution to the problem of overpopulation is for humans to settle other planets. What benefits has the world got from space exploration? Do you think humans will ever live on other planet?

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Nowadays, there are increasing numbers of problems on the Earth.
As a result
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, the topic of living outside our
planet
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 is becoming more popular. In
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 essay, I explore the benefits of
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exploration
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 and the possibility of living on some other
planet
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. There are many innovative products, which we regularly use, not assuming that
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 they were created for Universe
exploration
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.
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, the water filtration system was invented for astronauts to ensure their access to safe water for drinking. Now we use cartridge filters at home to clean tap water from harmful substances. The other example is a camera phone, which the majority of us use every day. Actually, it was invented in the NACA laboratory as a light, miniature imaging system to take high qualities photographs in
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.
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, we should point out the significant role of
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exploration
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 as a global deal for the world. Currently, many nations have uneasy relations due to disagreements in politics.
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, an astronaut team always includes representatives of different countries that help us maintain the global partnership for solving problems on our
planet
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. One
such
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 problem is the overpopulation of the Earth, and scientists are considering the possibility of life on other planets. If they continue developing
space
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 science and find another
planet
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 with similar Earth nature conditions, it will help us to provide
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 for life for future generations. To sum up, cosmos
exploration
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 helps us create many innovations for our days and support international partnerships between nations.
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, we should primarily focus on humanity's problems to ensure life for our descendants.
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