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Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollutionof land and sea. Some people think that they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is undeniably true that
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the use
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 of
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bags
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 for shopping has led to
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undesirable changes in land and
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. Some individuals opine that they should be banned. I totally agree with
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 statement and in
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 essay, I will support my opinion of prohibiting
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bags
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. The
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 and foremost reason for the prohibition of
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bags
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 is
its
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their
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 non-biodegradable nature which
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 both
sea
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 and land
life
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.
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 is because when these
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 cannot be reused,
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they
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 need to be burnt which produce chemical gases.
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,
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contribute
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 to
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air pollution.
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, these are harmful
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sea
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 animals if found in
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sea
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. If
sea
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 creatures
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accidentally
 swallow these
bags
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, it makes their
life
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 in danger.
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, a survey conducted by 'The Times' reported that 30% of
sea
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life
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 is found to be dead because of choking
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bags
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. The
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 reason
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 banning
plastic
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bags
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 is to reduce the wastage of money spend on making
plastic
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bags
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 nationwide. For the manufacturing of
plastic
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bags
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, machines and new materials are used as
plastic
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bags
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 cannot be recycled and reused. As
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 more money is needed to make these non-recyclable
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, it affects the economy.
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, if these
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 are banned and people are encouraged to use recyclable and reusable
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, it will prohibit the wastage of money of making
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bags
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 again and again. To illustrate, it is surveyed by 'The Reuse' that a country
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that
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 uses recyclable
bags
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 has grown economically more than a nation
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that
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 uses
plastic
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bags
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 for shopping. To conclude,
plastic
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bags
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 should be completely prohibited in order to make
sea
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 and land
life
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 healthier and happier due to their non-biodegradable property.
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, to improve the economy of a country, these non-recyclable
bags
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 should be banned.
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