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The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The line graph illustrates the amount of three kinds of spreads (oil, low fat and reduced the spreads and
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butter
) which were consumed over 26
years
 from 1981 to 2007. Units are measured in
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. Overall, the consumption of margarine and
butter
 decreased over the period given, while for low fat and reduced spreads, it rose. At the start of the period,
butter
 was the most popular spread, which was replaced by shortening from 1991 to 2001, and following that low fat and reduced spreads became the most widely used spread in the final
years
. With regards to the amount of
butter
 used, it began at around 140
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 and
then
 peaked at 160
grams
 in 1986 before falling dramatically to about 50
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 in the
last
 year.
Likewise
, approximately 90
grams
 of oil were eaten in the
first
 year after which the figure fluctuated slightly and dropped to a low of 40
grams
 in 2007.
On the other hand
, the consumption of low fats and reduced spreads only started in 1996 at about 10
grams
.
This
 figure, which reached a high of just over 80
grams
 5
years
 later, fell slightly in the final
years
 to approximately 70
grams
 in 2007. Overall, an equal percentage of boys and girls participated in music, with 10% of both genders choosing the activity.
Similarly
, while 11% of boys preferred skateboarding, an equal number of girls chose gymnastics.
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