Write an essay of 250 words to describe a large city.

Ho
Chi
Minh
city
or Saigon has always been a crowded and bustling
city
both daylight and midnight. Since it is one of the developing cities in Vietnam, a flood of
people
come from everywhere in the whole country to live, to work and to study here.
Hence
, Ho
Chi
Minh
has soon become active all day when
people
will go to work during the day and spend time relaxing or hanging out with friends at midnight.
For instance
, at 3 a.m you can still see a myriad of
people
around the Ben Thanh Street Food Market or in the Nguyen Hue walking street.
Although
it is bustling, somewhere in the
city
you may notice the homeless
people
wandering on the streets all night which show the other face of
SaiGon
Correct your spelling
Saigon
. Ho
Chi
Minh
is
also
well known for its skyscrapers apart from the busy atmosphere. Not only the most populous
city
in Vietnam but Ho
Chi
Minh
also
possesses most of the high buildings. According to Wikipedia, there are about 1,379 buildings completed in Saigon with more than 271 skyscrapers higher than 100 metres. In all of that, Landmark 81 is the highest building in Vietnam, in Asia and the fifteenth in the world which is
also
symbolic
for
Change preposition
of
show examples
this
charming
city
.
This
will contribute partly to make Ho
Chi
Minh
city
more popular
to
Change preposition
with
show examples
the world.
Submitted by doibichhoa on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: