Write about the following topic: Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

It is apparent that a

number

of animal species are facing

extinction

. In

this

essay, I will explain the key reasons behind the increasing

number

of animal

extinction

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extinctions

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and propose some ways to alleviate them. There are basically three reasons that contribute towards higher levels of animal

extinction

.

Firstly

, it is

due to

the high

number

of illegal poaching of endangered

animals

to be sold in

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market by irresponsible parties. As illegal animal poachers take benefits for their own

shake

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sake

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, they do it frequently.

Secondly

, the increasing

number

of urbanizations encroach

the

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ecosystem of

animals

. To illustrate, to sustain

growing

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the growing

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population of

human

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, more and more space is needed for agriculture.

Consequently

, many

animals

lose their habitat. Because of

this

, they tend to look for some food

to

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residential areas

and

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make

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them conflicted with

human

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, which

at

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the end

cause

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them killed. Two solutions that can be taken to overcome the problem are explained as follows.

First,

government

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the government

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should give more severe punishment to the illegal hunters. If the given punishment does not

give

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deterrent

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a deterrent

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effect, they will always do

over

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apply

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the activity again.

Furthermore

, there is a need to build more national parks where human activity is limited. When

animals

live in conservation, their food is fulfilled, and they can avoid conflicts with

human

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humans

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. In conclusion, animal

extinction

is commonly caused by human activities. The solutions for the problem are two-fold: giving severe punishment to reduce illegal poaching and building national parks to maintain sustainable animal

habitat

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.