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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.

#truth #consideration #relationship #support
Some people believe that it is one of the most important
value
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 in many
relationships
to
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 tell the
truth
 all the time.
However
, it cannot be always the best choice
to
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 tell the
truth
 in many
situatioins
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situations
. Sometimes white lies are
indispensible
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indispensable
 to keep
relationships
 more lively and
dilightly
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diligently
lightly
slightly
. There are some examples to support
this
 idea.
Firstly
, in the
relationships
 between lovers, it is often essential to
compliment
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 their lovers on their appearance and their .behavior. Even though they do not think that their boyfriend or girlfriend looks good
on
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in
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 their new shoes and new clothes, it will probably diss them by telling the
truth
.
On the other hand
, little compliments will make them confident and
happy making
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 their relationship
more tight
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.
Secondly
, parents need to encourage their children by telling lies. Even if they are doing bad work on studying or exercising, telling the
truth
 will hurt their hearts. What they need is a little encouraging
words
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instead
 of truthful words.
Thirdly
, for some patients telling them
their
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 current state of their
desease
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disease
 will probably desperate them. It is accepted publically not to let the patients know the
truth
. They may be able to have hope to overcome their
desease
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disease
 without knowing the
truth
. In conclusion, it is not always better
to
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 tell the
truth
 than lies. Some lies are acceptable in terms of making people's life more profusely. Not everybody has to know the
truth
, and it will lead them
more
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happier not knowing it. In these cases, white lies are worth to be regarded as a virtue of people's
relationships
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