Some people say that the government is responsible for aged care and financial support for the elderly; others argue that it’s the role of individuals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Older
people
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are important members of any society, and they require more help and attention. It is considered by some that the
government
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should provide financial assistance to the elderly, while there are others
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think that it is the responsibility of individuals. I believe that the
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should support the aged
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. In
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both views will be discussed before coming to a definite conclusion. On the one hand, a culture of saving
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of depending on the state fosters the overall economic development of a country.
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, if
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have
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set aside for their pension age, it would lessen the amount of financial responsibility on the
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. It would allow the ministry to provide funds to the development of more essential fields, like industries, production of goods, infrastructure healthcare and education.
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, if all citizens knew that the state would ensure them a decent retirement fund, they would have no motivation to work hard, try to build a career and save
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. In a personal aspect, saving
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gives individuals a way out from
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the uncertainties
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of life and an opportunity to enjoy greater security.
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, in the case of critical emergencies,
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have to deal with medical expenses and it requires
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financial preparedness.
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, old
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are physically weak and are financially incapacitated.
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, as there
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no
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alternative ways of earning for
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the elderly
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, their chances for employment are quite low compared to the young
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.
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, the
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should take care of
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the aged
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population and support them with a monthly pension and provide
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health insurance. It would allow the senior citizens to be examined and take the necessary medical care for human health.
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, if elderly
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are left alone, they should be able to afford
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domestic help and the facility of old age homes, where they can spend time with
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from the same age group. To conclude, despite the fact that saving
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for personal insurance has benefits not only for human’s well-being
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but
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for the country’s economy, I still think that
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should take care of old
people
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by supporting them financially.
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