Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

In the past two decades, a large number of research have focused on whether
gene
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would affect significantly human characteristics and have looked for
approached
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to reducing the connection between gene imperfection and character weaknesses.
However
, as far as I am concerned,
such
connection is elusive and personal
experiences
are indeed the driving force to shape/ mould/ sculpt/ polish characteristics. Admittedly, genetic traits could decide certain actions and
ideology
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of a particular person. The reason is crystal clear: interpersonal communication. To wit, researchers have identified certain nerves whose lack might lead to difficulties in understanding others. [ To wit, researchers have identified certain patients who lack specific nerves and show difficulties in understanding others.]
However
, pertinent authoritative observation has shown that
such
connection could be easily negated by
experiences
in
life
.
On the other hand
, characteristics shaped through
life
experiences
are much more solidified/ much stronger/ much less malleable. In most cases, small
children
are similar to empty canvas on which brushes, the
experiences
they have, would leave marks. It is not news anymore that devastating family issues
such
as
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of parents would make
children
much mature than their peers.
Also
, well-loaded families and pompous childhood
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mostly connected to supercilious adults [to adults being supercilious].
Children
with miserable childhood during which they have been abused by their parents would usually grow into adults with distrust
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others. In these cases, even though the
children
’s parents may have certain amiable features and pass them down to their
children
/
offsprings
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, these features would be covered by the strong influence of their
life
experience. Based on the specific analyses of the above-presented theories and
fact
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, it is not hard to reach a solid conclusion that
life
experiences
are much more influential than genetic traits in deciding a
person’characteristic
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person characteristic
person characteristics
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nature vs. nurture debate
  • genetic inheritance
  • personality traits
  • behavior patterns
  • heritability
  • twins studies
  • malleable characteristics
  • upbringing
  • environmental influences
  • critical periods
  • language acquisition
  • worldview
  • innate traits
  • personal experiences
  • psychological development
  • epigenetics
  • adaptive behaviors
  • cultural imprinting
  • temperament
  • social conditioning
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