Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?
In the past two decades, a large number of research have focused on whether
gene
would affect significantly human characteristics and have looked for Fix the agreement mistake
genes
approached
to reducing the connection between gene imperfection and character weaknesses. Correct your spelling
approaches
However
, as far as I am concerned, such
connection is elusive and personal experiences
are indeed the driving force to shape/ mould/ sculpt/ polish characteristics.
Admittedly, genetic traits could decide certain actions and ideology
of a particular person. The reason is crystal clear: interpersonal communication. To wit, researchers have identified certain nerves whose lack might lead to difficulties in understanding others. [ To wit, researchers have identified certain patients who lack specific nerves and show difficulties in understanding others.] Fix the agreement mistake
ideologies
However
, pertinent authoritative observation has shown that such
connection could be easily negated by experiences
in life
.
On the other hand
, characteristics shaped through life
experiences
are much more solidified/ much stronger/ much less malleable. In most cases, small children
are similar to empty canvas on which brushes, the experiences
they have, would leave marks. It is not news anymore that devastating family issues such
as death
of parents would make Add an article
the death
children
much mature than their peers. Also
, well-loaded families and pompous childhood is
mostly connected to supercilious adults [to adults being supercilious]. Change the verb form
are
Children
with miserable childhood during which they have been abused by their parents would usually grow into adults with distrust to
others. In these cases, even though the Change preposition
of
children
’s parents may have certain amiable features and pass them down to their children
/ offsprings
, these features would be covered by the strong influence of their Fix the agreement mistake
offspring
life
experience.
Based on the specific analyses of the above-presented theories and fact
, it is not hard to reach a solid conclusion that Fix the agreement mistake
facts
life
experiences
are much more influential than genetic traits in deciding a person’characteristic
.Correct your spelling
person characteristic
person characteristics
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...