Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree

There is no doubt that many wealthy nations provide financial support to

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indigent societies.

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some people believe that

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will solve their poverty problem, I would strongly argue that developing

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need support in other forms

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as educational aid.

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, destitution in any society can not be solved by just foreign money.

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is because these developing

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need to find new sources of income by creating more job opportunities, which can be achieved by educating more youngsters via building more schools and universities. The richer nations can assist in

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cause by funding these educational institutes.

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, a lot of startups have emerged out of India due to the increment in engineers being graduated every year.

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, if the

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government had not built these new engineering universities, these

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companies would not have been found, leading to fewer jobs and lesser income tax.

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, learning and developing skills are essential for

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employment and economic growth.

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, these communities need the freedom to solve their problems on their own. The reason for

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is many

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are becoming too dependent on foreign investment. One clear example of

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is,

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Afghanistan

became too reliant on America for solving their personal and international issues after the latter started to provide them financial support. Alternatively, if America had not offered money to

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, it would have forced

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to solve

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financial and political problems themselves. In conclusion, it can hardly be denied that poor

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need to address their community's problem themselves without relying solely on

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foreign investment. One way to accomplish

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goal is by educating more

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by creating more educational institutes, which can be funded by richer nations.