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Some people think that the only way to have success in business is to have a unique product What factors do you think influence the success of a company

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business
 depends upon various factors. While some people are of the view that the only way a company can thrive is by having a unique product, others are of the view that there are many other parameters that contribute towards the success of an enterprise. In
this
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about
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the
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several factors that influence the achievement of a company. There are two primary reasons for
this
.
To begin
 with, one of the major
factor
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 that decides the accomplishment of a
firm
 is the
quality
 of the products and services provided by them.
Moreover
,
general
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 public would prefer purchasing from a
business
 that offers the best
quality
 rather than a
firm
 that offers bad
quality
 goods
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For instance
, many people order products from amazon and a very less crowd make a purchase from
flipkart
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.
This
 is only because of the
quality
 which
amazon
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 provides to its customers.
Subsequently
,
this
 factor plays an important role in deciding the success of
a
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 entity.
Furthermore
, employees working in a particular organization
also
 have an impact on the achievement of a
firm
.
Additionally
, only when the staff working is satisfied with the culture of work, they can contribute effectively towards the growth and success of a
business
.
For example
,
zoho
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 has
an
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mazing
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 culture in their organization that motivates the workers to work effectively and
efficently
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efficiently
 achieving beyond the targets fixed.
Hence
, the staff gets
insipired
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inspired
 to work. By way of conclusion, I reaffirm my
postion
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position
 that there are many parameters that will have an impact on a
business
such
 as the
quality
 of services and the employees of the
firm
.
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