In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasing common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages.

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Mobile phones are extensively revolutionizing these days. In recent times, cell phones are more commonly used to make the payment for things. While some

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believe that there are many benefits from

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development, others are of the view that it has several drawbacks. In

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essay, I will be discussing the advantages. There are two primary reasons for

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with, payments made through online apps are more convenient to

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as it reduces the time for individuals to pay.

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, human beings are not required to put so much effort to make a transaction successful.

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, earlier when

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had to make payments, they had to travel all the way to banks or the respective place to complete the purchase. Nowadays, due to the advancement in technology

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Gpay

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, Paytm, Phonepay etc its become very easier to send money from one place to another.

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, our lives have become more efficient. Applications that are used through which money is being sent online is becoming much safer.

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, one of the important

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of paying via software is that

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secured

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when compared to the usage of debit or credit cards.

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, gadgets are becoming

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for

people

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to carry rather than cards.

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, when cards are carried in the wallets

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very risky because if it gets stolen

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all the confidential data will be used and hacked.

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mode

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of transaction done online is more effective. By way of conclusion, I reaffirm my position that the development of technology has enhanced our lives by making it convenient and

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safe.

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is why most

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moved from traditional to online modes.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

Introduction
Body paragraph 1 – advantages
Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

The main advantage is...
The disadvantage of this...
The main benefit...
Despite these advantages...
One possible drawback...

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

280 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

convenience
safety
security
time-saving
cashless transactions
dependence on technology
privacy concerns
accessibility issues
financial vulnerability

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasing common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages.

Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their studies in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • explain why you will be visiting the town • give details of where you will be staying • ask your friend to recommend some evening entertainment.

Some people think that the goverment should strictly control the supply of fresh water, as it is a limited resource , while others it should not be regulated. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion

The quality of health care a person receives should not depend on the size of their bank balance.The government is responsible for providing a high level of health care for all its citizens.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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