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Today, majority of children are raised by their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working. To what extent do you think that it affects the whole family?

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In
this
 contemporary ,Era most
parents
 are engaging in their work so
grandparents
 have taken the responsibility of mould toddlers.I partially support
this
 scenario due to various reasons that I will explain in
forthcoming
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 paragraphs.
To begin
 with,there are plenty of benefits if a
child
 has mould by
grandparents
.
Firstly
,majority of the
grandparents
 are taking rest after retirement so they do not have any other responsibilities and dreams in their life
therefore
 if they get chance to interact with children make them more energetic and healthy.For evidence, a survey conducted in one of the cities showed old people who have spent time with kids have the lowest health issues.
Secondly
, nowadays the life expenditures are high for that the
parents
 both should be employees to meet the living expenses and progenitors could reduce tension about their kid when the
child
 with their
parents
.
moreover
,more than
parents
grandparents
 have the ability to express more love and care to the children so they will happier and enjoyment
moreover
 grandmothers could narrate moral stories to kids that enhance their imagination ability and they should aware of the morals of life.
However
,due to various ,
reasons
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this
 trend would not give a positive effect.in many families
parents
 are busy with their work
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, therefore,
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therefore
child
 has lost their affection to
parents
 which leads to reduce the bonding between family members.
Furthermore
,many old people are unhealthy so they could not take care of the
child
.For evidence,many toddlers are naughty during childhood so
grandparents
 could not run with them if they are in trouble
grandparents
 could not protect them. To conclude, it is undeniable fact that the necessity of employment for both
parents
 so nurturing
child
 is the responsibility of both
parents
 and
grandparents
. It is hoping,in ,future each family member can create abound between themselves.
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