Your local library is hiring a new staff member, and you are interested in applying for the position. Write a letter to the library manager to apply for the job. •explain why you are interested in working at the library • describe your relevant qualifications and experience •ask about the next steps in the hiring process

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to express my interest in the librarian position at your local library. Currently, I am a second-year student at the state university which is located in the town
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your library. Since the starts Working interests in www academic year December, I am looking for a new employee as a librarian
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perfectly with my
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previous experience. I have experience
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working
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librarian
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a librarian
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.
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year I spent 7 months as an archivist assistant
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the Tashkent City State Archive and gained valuable experience. I
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like books and ancient manuscripts.
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I believe I possess all the necessary personal qualities for the position. I am hard-working, punctual and reliable. I am enclosing my CV, including full contact details as
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as my skills which you may find advantageous for the position. I can send references on request. I would be
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person Thank you for considering my application. Best regards, Marten

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coherence cohesion
Ensure the opening and closing of the letter are appropriately addressed. A more specific salutation and a clearer concluding statement would help.
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Use transitional phrases to connect paragraphs and ideas effectively. This will improve the overall flow of the letter.
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Revise grammar and punctuation for clarity. For example, ensure correct verb forms and avoid run-on sentences.
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The letter presents a clear interest in the position and describes relevant experience.
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The candidate's personal qualities are well-expressed, adding a positive tone to the application.
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