Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays all over the world, people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits, TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

I am writing
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letter to refer Mrs Johan a 25 weeks pregnant lady to your care, who requires a home visit and
further
management. She is being discharged today. During admission, Mrs Johan presented with generalised
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and palpitation. Upon examination, her tests revealed that she has high
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and has lost 8kg in the
last
3weeks;
therefore
, she was administered insulin and transfused 1 pint of
blood
. Socially, Mrs Johan is living with her husband. She has a sweet tooth that, she likes to consume cookies, chocolates, puddings and fruits. She does gardening and watches television programmes. She has a medical history of hypothyroidism, 1st pregnancy was
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and
blood
transfusion was commenced. In view of the above, kindly arrange for regular antenatal check-ups to ensure her
blood
pressure, urine and sugar level are controlled; advise and guide her on how to use self-administered insulin. It is worthy to note that, if she loss
further
weight, please refer her back to the hospital for
further
assessment; and her
next
scheduled appointment is on coming 28/07/19.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural globalization
  • Cultural exchange
  • Cross-cultural communication
  • Assimilation
  • Homogenization
  • Acculturation
  • Traditional customs
  • Local economies
  • Diversity
  • Inclusion
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