Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is that it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree?

Assisting

others

has always been the topmost priority of benevolent people. These people claim that being affluent is a blessing as it allows them to help

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impoverished individuals.

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essay will argue why helping

others

is the most important thing wealthy individuals should do. People regardless of their financial status have always been sceptical about their future. They are worried that one day they would lose all their wealth if they continue to provide monetary support to unprivileged citizens. And hold the view that they should rather invest their money and provide

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education to their children. Indeed, there have been some recorded instances of businessmen

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ending up in poverty and are unable to pay their own hospital bills.

Thus

these few instances have instilled fear in some individuals and

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them from assisting

others

. Despite these minor uncertainties associated with helping

others

, the idea of not supporting them is completely inhuman. If affluent societies would not aid the low-income families

then

they would eventually die due to poverty.

For example

, in countries like Denmark, the fatality rate due to impoverishment is significantly low as the poor constantly receive assistance from the rich.

Moreover

, generosity creates gratitude which gives the benefactor a sense of

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. Several studies have revealed that generous persons are able to live a more happy and contented life.

Therefore

, the well-to-do families should help the poor ones as it not only benefits the ill-fated citizens financially but

also

provides the givers with mental serenity.

This

essay argued that those who are against supporting

others

have a flawed understanding and they underestimate the power of benevolence.