There are severe social consequences to housing shortages in cities and only the government can solve these problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#consequences #shortages #cities #government

In today’s world, many

people

have suffered from a scarcity of housing due to lots of problems that they have been encountered. Some individuals believe that governments are able to exploit all facilities by creating jobs in urban areas to transform them into convenient places to live in. I entirely agree with that statement and I will give an explanation in my upcoming body paragraphs.

To begin

with, economic problems are the crucial things that most of the

people

throughout the world are confronting which caused them couldn’t own their dwell.

For instance

, in Iran, in the

last

ten years, due to sanctions of western countries, power abused and corruption led to the biggest inflation in our country.

Moreover

, construction has been reduced because of the increase in the price of the chemical materials

such

as concrete and specific sand used for it. So, the

government

can cope with these problems by devoting the unused land to low prices and give them unbacked loans for the

people

who didn’t have houses.

On the other hand

, terrorism is a catastrophic issue for the countries which are welcomed to surplus immigrants who have been damaged by these incidents. A case in point,

this

phenomenon has happened 7 years ago in Turkey. They have been accepting 3.4 million Syrian

people

after the war began.

Nevertheless

this

problem caused the

government

couldn't provide enough houses for them.

Therefore

, The United Nation Council have to play a key role on halting the unstoppable war in Syria and

also

appropriate or allocate budget to help turkey

government

to provide education, working, and rudimentary things for their dwelling. To conclude, providing houses for every human being is one of the duties and responsibilities that

government

should take into consideration.

However

this

action needs all parts of the community’s help

such

as private and public affairs to overcome it.

Mon Sep 20 2021

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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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