Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is clear that rich
countries
has
more access Change the verb form
have
of
living life Change preposition
to
appropriatly
and should help Correct your spelling
appropriately
appropriate
people
who are in need. Even for basic life such
as food and housing, wealthly
nations are always Correct your spelling
wealthy
first
in this
matter amoung
Correct your spelling
among
amount
countries
in the world. I completely agree on
accepting refugees and providing things of basic needs. Analyzing the capabilities of developed Change preposition
with
counrty
to help needy Correct your spelling
country
people
and policy of nation to regardless the income level how they can provide assistance them will prove this
.
Only a well developed
Add a hyphen
well-developed
countrties
are able to Correct your spelling
countries
offer
assistant for those who lost their identity and everything. When nations are strong enough for sponspring
to bring Correct your spelling
sponsoring
people
who are in need of help should give them hand first
since these
earned continent has enough space and ability to provide basic needs. Change the determiner
this
For example
, United State brought 5000 bhutani
refugees and provided housing and fooding for them. Change the capitalization
Bhutani
Similarly
other many Add a comma
,Similarly
countries
which has
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have
place
to share and a good financial condition to sponsor those suffering Add an article
a place
people
should consider assisting them. Rich land has high
level of earnings and wide vision so they should Add an article
a high
offer
help to live their live
. Poor Replace the word
life
countries
can not offer
any aid because thay
are struggling Correct your spelling
they
themselfs
. So, it is the responsibility of Correct your spelling
themselves
strong
kingdom to provide basic human rights.
Many nations who are not even strong financially, still Correct article usage
a strong
they
have made some effective policy to bring Correct pronoun usage
apply
such
homeless people
until they find the appropriate sponsor. In other word
, as long as there Change the wording
another word
other words
are
certain Change the verb form
is
law
to be able to Fix the agreement mistake
laws
offer
some aid for those who are in problem, people
of rich place
should give hand for the shake of humanity. For an instance, Nepal took Fix the agreement mistake
places
decision
to help Add an article
the decision
a decision
bhutani
sharanarthi Change the capitalization
Bhutani
untill
they find a long term solution. Correct your spelling
until
Thus
, prosperious
Correct your spelling
prosperous
place
and Fix the agreement mistake
places
people
should follow the rules of governmnt
and try to Correct your spelling
government
mitagate
the problem of others.
In conclusion, there are many Correct your spelling
mitigate
contries
who are financially strong and has a great policy to shut out the problem in any part of the world has assisted many refugees from Correct your spelling
countries
different
continent. I fully agreed that when Add an article
a different
people
have something to offer
they should help and try to get rid of serious problems.Submitted by laxmithapa2921 on
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