Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads to what extent do you agree or disagree?

A group of individuals are inclined to think that administration has to invest funds for reconstructing railways
instead
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on
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them on
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roads
. If questioned, I strongly disagree with
this
viewpoint. My position is celebrated
for
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the
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with reasons and examples. The foremost argument to justify my stand is that roadways are equivalent essential as
the
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railway lines. Money should be spent equally on
both
the
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services. Every type of community
ways
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way
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is used. It is better if
government
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the government
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focus on
both
.
For example
, many people travel by train and
then
take
bus
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a bus
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to go to work, during that time, you feel comfortable when sitting
in
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on
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the train but after that
in
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the bus
ride
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you feel unhappy because of
roads
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the roads
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.
Therefore
, they should be improved in the same manner. The other reason to prove my point is some country has tedious road system as well as quality. If union central point
is only trains
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then
they will be
more and more worse
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worse and worse
worse
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in the coming times.
Thus
, the impact
of
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on
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that nation will be very bad.
For instance
, in Pakistan, The
roads
are not in
well
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condition. in
such
situation
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pak
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government does not solve the problems and
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interest-only
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interest
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interests
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only trains, the issue will
last
forever.
Consequently
, the development
for
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of
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roads
cannot be neglected. To conclude, I personally disagree with the statement because
of
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revenue must
be spend
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be spent
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on
both
public transport equally. it is necessary to improve
both
as soon as possible.
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