“The internet never will replace traditional course books in school”. How far do you agree with this prediction?
These days a lot of
books
are published in two tools, which papers and the internet
. Despite, reading books
on the internet
is becoming popular, for school-aged children, conventional paper-based books
may be more suitable than web-based. Staring a screen for long hours isn’t good for their eyes and general wellbeing.
Firstly
, paper-based textbooks give us more real imagination and feeling because the human brain responds a variety of actions to real paper-based statements compared to read texts on the internet
. Therefore
, there is an enormous difference to gain knowledge between abstract books
and real paper-based books
. For instance
, in my case, I can’t read a long article or news on the internet
due to the fact that my attention isn’t fully concentrated on the internet
environment.
Secondly
, we access the internet
through cell phones or computers, thus
we have to look at a blue lighted screen in order to catch up the data or news. Staring a display for long hours affects our brain and eyes. Some studies have mentioned about influences of the blue-lighted screens on our health and brain such
as it causes sleep deprivation and drops our quality of ability to see. So, we should select a safer mode for our physic rather than a harmful option for learning.
Having considered the potential issues, I’m not in favour of getting knowledge through the internet
because of possible the harmful effect caused by a screen and the risk to students’ health. Reading on the internet
is more suitable to read mini-articles and news for adults.Submitted by mgl2666 on
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