Do you think that technological advancement has brought more harm than good? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. What technologies did you use to help you in your studies? Describe how it has helped you. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Due to technological progress, the world has undergone great changes. Some
people
consider that it has more negative effects
,
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than positive, while others have the opposite point of view. While I agree that the
impact
of
such
advancement can be harmful, I
also
see its benefits. Among the positive aspects,
one
can single out the facilitation of
people
's
work
, as well as an improvement in the
quality
of
education
. Today, automation and robotization have contributed to reducing
labor
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intensity and saving
time
.
For
example
, if earlier workers had to do
such
hard
work
by
hand
, now they can use complex machines that will greatly facilitate their
work
and reduce the
time
to complete it.
Besides
,
education
has become much more convenient and accessible. Thanks to the
Internet
,
people
can find almost any information they need.
Moreover
, they have the opportunity to take online training, participate in discussions on forums and improve their knowledge on a variety of topics.
For
example
, I was able to take an English course, without leaving my
home
and significantly improve my skills. At the same
time
, there are ecological and social issues associated with
the
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rapid industrial development. Increasing levels of
production
and consumption entail environmental pollution, and, are
also
one
of the causes of global warming.
For instance
, most industries often emit large amounts of harmful
gases
, including greenhouse
gases
like carbon dioxide in their
production
processes.
In addition
, in the age of technology, when it is possible to communicate with the
Internet
, some
people
may lose touch with
the
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real life
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and find themselves in social isolation.
This
phenomenon can lead to serious mental and physiological health
problems
in a person. A good illustration of
this
is my friend, who spent too much
time
at
home
sitting at the computer.
Consequently
, he began to suffer from insomnia, and he began to experience headaches. In conclusion, technological progress is a blessing and an enemy of humanity at the same
time
. On the
one
hand
, it makes life easier for
society
, improves the
quality
of
education
and increases
labor
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productivity.
On the other
hand
,
it’s
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impact
can lead to serious
problems
related to the environment and
society
as a whole.
people
consider that it has more negative effects
,
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than positive, while others have the opposite point of view. While I agree that the
impact
of
such
advancement can be harmful, I
also
see its benefits. Among the positive aspects,
one
can single out the facilitation of
people
's
work
, as well as an improvement in the
quality
of
education
. Today, automation and robotization have contributed to reducing labour intensity and saving
time
.
For
example
, if earlier workers had to do
such
hard
work
by
hand
, now they can use complex machines that will greatly facilitate their
work
and reduce the
time
to complete it.
Besides
,
education
has become much more convenient and accessible. Thanks to the
Internet
,
people
can find almost any information they need.
Moreover
, they have the opportunity to take online training, participate in discussions on forums and improve their knowledge on a variety of topics.
For
example
, I was able to take an English course, without leaving my
home
and significantly improve my skills. At the same
time
, there are ecological and social issues associated with rapid industrial development. Increasing levels of
production
and consumption entail environmental pollution, and, are
also
one
of the causes of global warming.
For instance
, most industries often emit large amounts of harmful
gases
, including greenhouse
gases
like carbon dioxide in their
production
processes.
In addition
, in the age of technology, when it is possible to communicate with the
Internet
, some
people
may lose touch with
real-life
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real life

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and find themselves in social isolation.
This
phenomenon can lead to serious mental and physiological health
problems
in a person. A good illustration of
this
is my friend, who spent too much
time
at
home
sitting at the computer.
Consequently
, he began to suffer from insomnia, and he began to experience headaches. In conclusion, technological progress is a blessing and an enemy of humanity at the same
time
. On the
one
hand
, it makes life easier for
society
, improves the
quality
of
education
and increases labour productivity.
On the other
hand
, its
impact
can lead to serious
problems
related to the environment and
society
as a whole.
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