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Some people say that the main environmental problem ofour time is the loss ofparticular species ofplants and animals.. Others say that there are more important environmentalproblems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people argue that
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 of certain species is the most serious environmental problem of our time. Others say that there are other significant environmental
problems
. In
this
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 I will discuss both sides of
this
 issue and give my opinion. On one hand, the loss of particular species of plants and animals will result in an imbalanced ecosystem.
For example
, the disappearance of
bees
.
Bees
 are the most important pollinators. Many fruits and vegetables are insect-pollinated, and could not be grown at
such
large
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 scale,or so cheaply without
bees
.
In other words
, if
the
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 world without
bees
 would cause the food resources of
human
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 to reduce considerably.
On the other hand
, others claim that there are more noticeable environmental
problems
.
For instance
, global warming,
it
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is caused by greenhouse gases
such
 as carbon dioxide. Greenhouse gases are like a blanket covering the Earth, make the temperature of the Earth getting higher. Because it is hotter, glaciers and ice sheets are melting.
Then
 the seas are rising, it leads to the people who live in low-lying areas have lost their houses. In my opinion,there are too many environmental
problems
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that should
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 be noticed. But
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the extinction
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 of specific species is not the most urgent issue that mankind face. It is never too late to postpone and improve the environmental
problems
 that have threatened people's lives.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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