Today more people are overweight than ever before. What is your opinion are the primary causes of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic?

In

contemporary

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era , more individuals are obese than

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time.

Although

, secondary

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lifestyle

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life style

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lifestyle

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and eating fast

food

are

main

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reasons behind it;

however

, multiple steps can be taken to solve

this

issue. The major reason strike to my mind is that

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people became

workaholic

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workaholics

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,

the

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they

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are forced to eat ready to eat

food

,which contains

lot

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a lot

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of spices, oil and extra calories, that are responsible for getting weight, because they do not have

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enough time to prepare

food

at home which is healthy.

Moreover

, advanced technology

also

making people lazy ,they spend most of their time on

computer

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and in front of

television

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the television

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and avoid physical activities, as a

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individual

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individuals

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became obese.

For instance

, one can easily watch all

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places from the comfort of their home through YouTube.

Also

,long sitting jobs are

common

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cause behind it . In order to mitigate the

problem

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multiple measures can be used.

Firstly

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government should

bann

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ban

junk

food

from school menus and plan healthy diets for children.

Also

, parks should be built in every society so that masses can be motivated for morning and evening

walk

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.

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to

this

authorities should arrange

compagins

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campaigns

companies

to council the public about physical activities and

also

,they can explain about diseases that

occurs

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with obesity like diabetes. In conclusion, while, sitting

job

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and consumption of junk foods are

main

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the main

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reasons behind

overweight

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being overweight

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, I believe that

this

issue can be handled with government as well as individual efforts

such

as routine physical

work up

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workup

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and avoid fast foods.