In many countries today, crime novels and tv crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and tv shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction tv crime dramas?

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and crime fiction is the new cool and most loved goner by
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and web series are going up with some serious action and awesome
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. These are something which is being
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a great impact on viewers, namely
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, amazon prime,
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with utmost comfort and in best budget with ease.
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because it is time taking and expensive process. But
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the go, while travelling, working, cooking almost everywhere. As the consumption increased slowly their
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interests
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crime dramas, as work pressure is increasing, they want to watch
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