Increasingly, many young people are deciding to work or study in other countries. What are the causes of this phenomenon? Do you think it is a positive or negative situation?

An increasing number of younger

people

are choosing to either

work

or

study

in other nations. The main causes of

this

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conditions are better job

opportunities

and other facilities provided by overseas governments than in their own

countries

. I believe

this

is a negative situation because young

people

play an important role in developing nations. The main reason for many young generations to opt foreign

countries

for

work

or

study

is

that better job

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that better job opportunity

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opportunities

.

This

is to say that a huge number of youths become unemployed with higher qualifications in many underdeveloped

countries

.

In other words

, there are fewer

opportunities

and low paid

jobs

for educated

people

than

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countries

.

Therefore

, in order to get high paid

jobs

, they are more likely to emigrate to

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foreign lands.

Furthermore

, another cause is that they are not getting essential facilities,

such

as education, health and others.

That is

to say that their government after paying taxes whereas in foreign land these facilities are supported by the states and

hence

more and more

people

prefer to go abroad rather than staying in their own

countries

.

For example

, more than 10

millions

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of

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Nepalese are settled in abroad

countries

for the purpose of

work

or

study

.

However

, I think

this

is a negative development because youths can play a vital role in a country's development. I believe that

this

is a negative trend because youths are the main source to support their nations for development.

This

is to say that if all the adults leave their

countries

, the older and children would be there and the country requires younger

people

for multiple

jobs

in different sectors.

For instance

, in Nepal, these days, it’s very difficult to find

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labor

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for any works because most of the workers have migrated to the Middle East

countries

and the government of Nepal is facing difficulties in many construction works.

Therefore

, due to

this

reason, I believe

this

is a negative situation. In conclusion,

although

a large number of young

people

decide to fly

foreign

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countries

to

work

or

study

due to better

opportunities

and high paid

jobs

, I believe

this

is a negative condition because their

countries

need human manpower for developing themselves.