Increasingly, many young people are deciding to work or study in other countries. What are the causes of this phenomenon? Do you think it is a positive or negative situation?

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An increasing number of younger
people
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are choosing to either
work
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or
study
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in other nations. The main causes of
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conditions are better job
opportunities
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and other facilities provided by overseas governments than in their own
countries
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. I believe
this
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is a negative situation because young
people
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play an important role in developing nations. The main reason for many young generations to opt foreign
countries
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for
work
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or
study
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is
that better job
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that better job opportunity
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opportunities
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.
This
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is to say that a huge number of youths become unemployed with higher qualifications in many underdeveloped
countries
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.
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, there are fewer
opportunities
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and low paid
jobs
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for educated
people
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than
foreign
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in foreign
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countries
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.
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, in order to get high paid
jobs
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, they are more likely to emigrate to
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foreign lands.
Furthermore
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, another cause is that they are not getting essential facilities,
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as education, health and others.
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to say that their government after paying taxes whereas in foreign land these facilities are supported by the states and
hence
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more and more
people
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prefer to go abroad rather than staying in their own
countries
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.
For example
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, more than 10
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of
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Nepalese are settled in abroad
countries
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for the purpose of
work
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or
study
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.
However
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, I think
this
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is a negative development because youths can play a vital role in a country's development. I believe that
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is a negative trend because youths are the main source to support their nations for development.
This
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is to say that if all the adults leave their
countries
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, the older and children would be there and the country requires younger
people
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for multiple
jobs
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in different sectors.
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, in Nepal, these days, it’s very difficult to find
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the labor
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labor
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labour
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for any works because most of the workers have migrated to the Middle East
countries
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and the government of Nepal is facing difficulties in many construction works.
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, due to
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reason, I believe
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is a negative situation. In conclusion,
although
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a large number of young
people
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decide to fly
foreign
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to foreign
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countries
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to
work
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or
study
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due to better
opportunities
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and high paid
jobs
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, I believe
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is a negative condition because their
countries
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need human manpower for developing themselves.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalization
  • Interconnected
  • Higher education
  • Prestigious institutions
  • Research facilities
  • Career advancement
  • International experience
  • Resume
  • Cultural exchange
  • Immerse
  • Broaden worldviews
  • Economic factors
  • Unemployment
  • Quality of life
  • Standards of living
  • Healthcare
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