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It is more important for a building to serve a purpose than to look beautiful. Architects shouldn't worry about producing building as a work of art. Do you agree or disagree?

#purpose #architects #shouldn #work #art
Architects have resulted to designing
buldings
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buildings
 which are just attractive to the eyes,they need concentrate more on detailed
art work
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artwork
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.
Buildings
 are not meeting the desired requirements set aside by the government it is a matter of beauty on the outside .
This
 essay will explore the merits and
dimerits
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demerits
 and give a conclusion.
Buildings
 have become a source of income for the majority of people,construction sites are full of unprofessional people ,what matters most is that the building is done and people can find their way in there ,
this
 has resulted in dire consequences,
for
example
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buildings
 that detail has not been a keen factor are not well finished,cheap and poor materials are used ,
eventually
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this same
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this same building
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buildings
 will collapse and bring about
calamaties
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calamities
 that were not intended another issue the higher the apartment with so many units the
better detailed
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 art is no longer a prerequisite.
On the other
hand
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 houses that have served the detailed part of it are always
eye catching
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,It is necessary to have
buildings
 that are detailed because
this
 not only enhances the culture of the citizens but they are
long lasting
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buildings
 built with every single detail and
high quality
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 materials
thus
 making them expensive,
for
instance
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 houses or
buildings
 that were designed in early years of
60s
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the 60s
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 and 70s,take an example with the
buildings
 in
lamu
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-
kenya
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 and fort
jesus
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,they are not modern but are still in existence whereas the current ones are just collapsing out of nowhere. In
conclusion
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 detailed art is very important and not only is it a sight to behold but enriches the culture of that particular country,
Buildings
 should be constructed and designed in a way that they
fulfill
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 their desired intentions.
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