It is more important for a building to serve a purpose than to look beautiful. Architects shouldn't worry about producing building as a work of art. Do you agree or disagree?

Architects have resulted to designing

buldings

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buildings

which are just attractive to the eyes,they need concentrate more on detailed

art work

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.

Buildings

are not meeting the desired requirements set aside by the government it is a matter of beauty on the outside .

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essay will explore the merits and

dimerits

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demerits

and give a conclusion.

Buildings

have become a source of income for the majority of people,construction sites are full of unprofessional people ,what matters most is that the building is done and people can find their way in there ,

this

has resulted in dire consequences,

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example

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buildings

that detail has not been a keen factor are not well finished,cheap and poor materials are used ,

eventually

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this same

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this same building

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buildings

will collapse and bring about

calamaties

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calamities

that were not intended another issue the higher the apartment with so many units the

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art is no longer a prerequisite.

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hand

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houses that have served the detailed part of it are always

eye catching

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,It is necessary to have

buildings

that are detailed because

this

not only enhances the culture of the citizens but they are

long lasting

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buildings

built with every single detail and

high quality

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materials

thus

making them expensive,

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houses or

buildings

that were designed in early years of

60s

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and 70s,take an example with the

buildings

in

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-

kenya

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and fort

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,they are not modern but are still in existence whereas the current ones are just collapsing out of nowhere. In

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detailed art is very important and not only is it a sight to behold but enriches the culture of that particular country,

Buildings

should be constructed and designed in a way that they

fulfill

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their desired intentions.