Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter,
 - invite him or her to a public event in your country 
 - describe the public event 
 - explain other plans you have for your friend when he or she visits.

Hey Lena, How are you? I hope you’re doing well. Haven’t seen you since you moved to France. I would love to meet you. What do you think about visiting Minsk
next
summer? I heard from the news that on August 15-17
first
carnival will be organized here in Minsk. It’s supposed to be an incredibly large-scale event that Minsk has never seen before. The huge parade will be held on the
first
day of the festival. If you come we definitely should make some costumes and masks. On the
second
day, world-famous music bands will be invited and various dance floors will be installed.
Moreover
, there will be an amazing drone show at the end of the festival,
instead
of traditional fireworks. If you like we can visit some of the public art shows and exhibitions which will be organized everywhere in the city these days. And of course, I will take you to my
favorite
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cafes I bet they are not worse than in France. Let me know what you think! Regards Olga.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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