Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages ?
These days, citizen
behaviors
are detected by technology for preventing crime and helping police investigation widely. Change the spelling
behaviours
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, they do not aware of being used and restricted their personal Linking Words
life
from the authorities. In the Use synonyms
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positives
and drawbacks will be discussed in detail.
It is undeniable that machinery is played Correct article usage
the positives
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city
safer as security cameras Correct article usage
the city
set
around crossroads and corners of town. In that case, any outrages in any part of the city will be seen and cracked on time. Add a missing verb
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, technology is considerably useful for detecting Linking Words
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high quality
data collection. Add a hyphen
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This
will help Linking Words
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solve the crime scenes, Fix the agreement mistake
policemen
for example
finding Linking Words
criminal
by their digital footprints. In many cases, Tech equipment constraints any faults by looking after hidden parts.
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criminals
However
, citizen privacy can be disturbed by the officials who occupy their personal data. As our Linking Words
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any
time even Change preposition
at any
on
online or offline without any consent from us. They can use it to do whatever they need Change preposition
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such
as making agreements on their policy or banning the information they do not want. In that case, our freedom of speech and action will be restricted by some powers. As we can see in China, some comments which Linking Words
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mentioned their official mayors are banned Change the verb form
are
in
Chinese social media. So, there are many arguments that Change preposition
on
this
should be limited detecting space to keep our private Linking Words
life
.
In conclusion, there are many effective sides of using machinery for monitoring the criminal and crime scenes, while our private Use synonyms
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is decreased. It seems to me that the disadvantages of Use synonyms
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outweigh the advantages. So, Linking Words
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technology should be limited to Linking Words
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our privacy.Replace the word
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