Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed. However, some people think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals consider that
zoos
are not beneficial and must be closed,while others are
opposite
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to it. In
this
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I will discuss both sides along with my opinion which will be highlighted in the forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with,
people
who think that
zoos
should be closed reason behind it are considerable.
Firstly
, misuse of
animals
, they use
animals
for shooting
purpose
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and get money from it . Even it is the source of income for few
people
.
Secondly
, lack of proper diet , they do not provide sufficient diet to all
animals
which leads to their poor growth and development and
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major cause of death of
animals
in
zoos
.
Also
, unnecessary experiments
conducted
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on
animals
in
zoos
with the permission of
owner
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the owner
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. On the other side and according to my point of view,
animals
are safe in
zoos
, because they provide protection to
it
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. Primarily,
animals
are kept
in
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under supervision, so that they can be prevented from
harms
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.
Zoos
not only protect the
animals
,
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but
also
meet the all needs of
animals
like proper treatment is given to them in case of sickness. Secondarily,
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animals
, which are on the verge of extension , special efforts are taken by the
zoos
,so that they can ve saved.
In addition
to
this
,
people
are not allowed to touch any
animals
and
people
also
pay charges if they want to visit
zoos
. To conclude,
although
zoos
are cruel for
animals
at
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some extent;
however
, I believe that , they are important to protect the
animals
that are on the verge of extension.
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  • animal welfare
  • conservation
  • captive breeding
  • habitat
  • ethical issues
  • zoochosis
  • endangered species
  • genetic diversity
  • reintroduction programs
  • wildlife education
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