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You have recently discovered that a product you particularly like, and often purchase, will no longer be produced. You have decided to write a letter to the company to object to the discontinuation of this item: •what the product is and why you like it so much •how its removal from production will affect you •what you would like the company to do as an alternative

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing regarding the product
that is
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 discontinued by the company Parle G which was quite good and beneficial for human health. Discontinued digestive cookies that were manufactured by the company were one of the favourites in the area where I am living. It was the normal snack for me
along with
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 tea or coffee. The best part of
this
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 biscuit was the
flour
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, it was made from oatmeal.
Moreover
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, I am allergic to wheat and white
flour
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, most of the cookies available in the market are either mixed
flour
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 or individual
flour
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.
Therefore
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, digestive was one of the snacks that suits me well. Now I have to look and try for another tea-time snack. Parle G is one of the well-known cookie production companies in the country. I would request you to find any alternative edible thing, which will suit everyone and especially for the special dietary people. I hope you will consider
this
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 and come up with a new launch. Yours faithfully, Harpreet Kaur.

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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single clear idea to enhance coherence.
task achievement
Provide more details or examples about the impact the product's discontinuation has on you to fully achieve the task.
coherence cohesion
The letter uses a clear greeting and closing, making it polite and structured.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is suitable and reflects a polite and respectful request.
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