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In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, an increasing number of
people
 are suffering from health problems, one of the most common
reason
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reasons
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 for these diseases is eating junk
food
.
However
, some
people
 believe that government should take some precautions, like imposing a higher tax on
this
 kind of
food
. What are the advantages and disadvantages of
this
 idea? On the one hand, there are a number of arguments against
of
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this
 statement.
Firstly
, some
people
 do not have enough
time
 for cooking, they would rather eat fast
food
, as it saves
people
’s money and
time
. My mum is one of those
people
 who are busy all day long, so eating
such
 kind of
food
 is
conventional
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 thing for her. The
second
 reason is the taste. Perhaps it is the greatest advantage, which gives
people
 emotional pleasure,
this
 fact and low price
makes
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 fast
food
 the most popular
food
 in the whole world!
On the other hand
, there are some drawbacks. We are what we eat, junk
food
 has nothing in common with healthy
food
, which contains a host of vitamins and nutritions. That’s why fast
food
 causes many health problems like obesity, heart diseases and so on. It is
obviously
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 why
people
 choose
this
 type of
food
 and it is acceptable to eat some burgers or pizza from
time
 to
time
, but some
people
 are addicted to
food
,
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 and do need help. Sometimes it seems like my mum is addicted
to
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itto
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!
This
 dependence
also
 affects
on
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her health and mostly on body shape,
what
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which
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 can cause emotional problems. If
government
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the government
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 knows how to deal with
such
problem
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a problem
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,
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than
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then
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 they should do that, even if it can harm someone else. To sum up, there are both good and bad points of imposing
higher
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a higher
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 tax on fast
food
. For someone it is
convenience
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, so making
higher
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a higher
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 tax on
this
 kind of
food
 can make
people
’s life even more complicated. But there is another side, which needs immediate solutions.
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