A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. Give details of when you would be available for work.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
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letter in relation to the vacancy for part-time voluntary work that has come up in your
museum
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. I came to know about
this
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opening from one of my close
friend
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who is working there as
permanent
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a permanent
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full-time employee. Since my
childhood
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it has been my dream to work in
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museum
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the museum
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even if
its
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it's
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without pay,
its
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mainly due to my keen interest
towards
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the
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history
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. I have been referred
as
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a child prodigy when it comes to
history
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or anything related to
history
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. I have won several prizes in my academic year for ancient studies. Apart from that at the
moment
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I am doing my major in
history
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, which would make me an added advantage for your
museum
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. As I would utilize my skills for the betterment of the
museum
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. I would be available to work for you on Tuesday, Thursday, Saturday and
Sundays
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from
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apply
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the morning
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morning
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mornings
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.
Rest
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other days I will be busy with my classes. I hope you would consider my profile for the opening, I have attached my resume along with
this
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letter. Kindly go through it. Thanking You Yours sincerely Neethu Babu
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enthusiastic
  • Volunteer
  • Part-time
  • Unpaid work
  • Museum director
  • Skills and qualities
  • Customer service
  • Organization
  • Team player
  • Flexible
  • Reliable
  • Positive attitude
  • Availability
  • Professional goals
  • Community contribution
  • References
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