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computer education is compulsory at school level. it shouldn't be kids can learn from their daily interaction. do you agree or not

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Nowadays
computer
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education
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 has become mandatory to survive in
this
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world
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. Some people believe that it should be compulsory at the
school
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level
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 while others think that kids can learn
computers
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 from daily interaction. I believe that incorporating
computer
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education
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 in the
school
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 curriculum helps kids to learn
computers
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 from a basic
level
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 and excel in the same.
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, by making
computer
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education
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 mandatory at the
school
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level
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, it helps students to be enthusiastic about
computers
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. In
schools
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 all the
subjects
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 will be treated with equal care and children think that
computers
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 are equally important as other
subjects
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 like math and science.
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, schools have a well-designed curriculum for all
subjects
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 and when
computers
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 become one of the students automatically tend to cope up with
computers
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 as other
subjects
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 which helps them
further
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 in their careers.
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, in today's
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world
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 most of the jobs are based on
computers
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. With
computers
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 ruling the
world
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 there are many jobs created from operator
level
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 to engineering concepts. So having basic knowledge of
computers
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 at the
school
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level
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 helps students to choose
computers
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 as their career options.
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, a child is taught
computers
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 at
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school
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the school
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level
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 and he is given basic graphics
then
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 he can choose a career out of graphic designing which is one of the booming jobs in the present market. With proper planning of schools in the curriculum of children
subjects
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, they can make wonders in the field of
computers
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. To conclude, it is mandatory to make
computer
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education
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 at the
school
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level
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 so that children can make the best out of
computers
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. It helps them to keep up with the competition in the
computer
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world
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.
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