In some areas in the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion?

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The charts provide information on the natural sources of
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available on our planet and examine their distribution across different types of
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and different regions of the world.
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, almost all the
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on Earth resides in the oceans; freshwater comprises only a low percentage of the total
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resources and is mainly frozen or located underground.
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, the tiny amount of freshwater
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accessible on the surface is distributed unevenly across the continents. About 97% of
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on Earth is saltwater and only three per cent of it is freshwater.
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, over two-thirds of freshwater is trapped as ice in glaciers and polar ice caps. The remaining unfrozen freshwater is found mainly as
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groundwater
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, with only a small fraction of 1.2% present above ground. With regard to freshwater found on the surface, it is
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called renewable freshwater and is represented by lakes, rivers and other sources. The supply of
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varies greatly from continent to continent, with the largest resources concentrated in South America and Asia (around 17 and 15 thousand square kilometres respectively). To compare, the resources of the other four continents are at most half the size of those in South America.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • curfew
  • delinquent activities
  • safeguard
  • instil discipline
  • anxiety
  • hazardous
  • infringe
  • social development
  • rebellious behavior
  • strain resources
  • critical issues
  • root causes
  • teenage delinquency
  • superficial solution
  • constructive engagement
  • unintentional bias
  • profiling
  • marginalized groups
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