More and more couples are deciding to be "child-free", to have no children, in other words. Some people claim that those couples reach this conclusion through entirely selfish reasons. While others think that they came to this decision through noble motives, such as concern about overpopulation and desire for independence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent days couples prefer to enjoy
life
without kids.some folk tend to believe that they are making
this
decision
for self-happiness while others claim that they are taking a
decision
after analyzing various factors
such
as overpopulation and independence.According to my,these statements need proper scrutinization before forming an opinion. On the one hand,due to a myriad of reasons husband and wife are deciding to
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no child.
Firstly
,in
this
modern ,era both parents have educated and employees so that they have to spend more time at
office
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rather than homes ,
although
they do not have enough time to mould a toddler
moreover
after stressful working hours they prefer to enjoy
life
without tensions and responsibilities because they are aware of the difficulties to nurture a child.For evidence,many of my friends have taken the
decision
to live without childer and they wish to get an enjoyable
life
.
Secondly
,
life
expenditures have been increasing
therefore
accommodating new members in families leads to the requirement of high income so that parents have to work more time in order that couples lose their precious
life
moments.
On the other hand
,many of the countries have faced the problems of overpopulation,which leads to several issues like poverty ,lack of employment opportunities because of that after marriage many couples have taken the
decision
which is
life
childfree.For evidence, many Asian countries have been facing the problem of overpopulation
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sure essential to
this
decision
. To conclude,due to various reasons people have taken the
decision
of child-free
life
;
however
children are essential for every person's
life
,they will create meaning for
life
but the government has made sure the number of kids according to the countries wealth.
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