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Nowadays more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problem does this cause? What are the possible solutions?

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Plenty of
people
 who are in their middles ages have to be suffered a lot because of the competition with teenagers when applying for similar types of jobs. Majorly, the modern technology is easily accessible by young
people
 to find a suitable employer, better over the adults, and they are really involving with the mental stresses more is a cause to become less efficient on seeking a good income. I will explain the issues in detail, that I have mentioned and
also
 give suitable solutions for each in the upcoming paragraphs. In
this
 20th ,century the entire society is going in parallel with the technology, usage of laptops, smartphones, tablets, etc.,
further
 the new generation is empowered on that because of the frequent usage compared to the elderly
people
 who are used to be with their traditional mindsets.
For example
, 13 years old boy or girl can use a smartphone and teach a suitable way of finding job vacancies on the internet, on the websites
such
 as 'top jobs.
lk'
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like
, 'observer jobs.
lk'
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like
 to their
parents
 which is some kind of miracle to them. As a solution, workshops related to smart devices can be introduced to adultery
people
 by the government which will enhance the capabilities of the old generations in the nation.
Moreover
, nowadays the whole tension is taken by the farther in many households, where their young children can be freely concentrated on what they were doing, schooling, exams or some kind of employment.
For instance
, due to the vast fondness of the
parents
 for their babies (younger children are
also
 seen as babies by their
parents
, most of the time), they never want to take responsibility, but be in a comfort zone. To
this
,
parents
 should change their mindsets to be toughed to their boy or girl, but not showing them a comfort-zone,
then
 only they will realize the hardness of family life.
Then
, the stress will be distributed among the family and it will ease the access for the older
people
 on their researching on employments. In conclusion, enriching the knowledge of elderly
people
 with today's technology as well as find a suitable way to ease the tension of their families will be an effective solution for the drawback, older
people
 meet a huge rat race in order to find a particular job.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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