Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this statement?

It is undeniable that participating

voluntary

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activities

,

such

as working for a charity and society improving, can create many advantages for many pupils.

This

is the reason some persons think that

community

service without paying should be mandatory for

students

in high

school

. From my point of view, I agree with

this

viewpoint for many reasons which will be outlined in the detail in the following paragraph. On the on hand, participating in unpaid

community

services

of high

school

sometimes is a waste of time for many

students

because they should be learned only what they want to study.

For example

, someone has interested in art, they can take an art class to replace voluntary

activities

to create artwork for making their portfolio.

On the other hand

, these voluntary

services

can

also

create a lot of benefits for

students

as well.

For instance

, they can learn many

skills

, like teamwork

skills

, communication

skills

, problem-solving

skills

and time management

skills

when they work with others from different backgrounds.

Additionally

, they will gain more experience and responsibility which have

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for their future, and working on a charity service not only makes them more

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for neighbourhood and society

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but

also

helps them to increase self-confidence.

Furthermore

, the pupils who graduated with these

activities

tend to have a better opportunity in applying for university and career rather than

students

who do not have voluntary

services

in their resume, in my opinion. In conclusion, I strongly agree with

this

statement because the pupils can make a lot of positive impacts

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participating

unpaid

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community

service in high

school

, and they can use these benefits to make a career path or a university path in their future.

Therefore

, it is recommended that parents and teachers should support and encourage their children to join some

community

services

in their

school

, and the

students

should choose these

activities

by themself.