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Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers, and discuss at at least one problem that may result.

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Nowadays
computers
 have taken over a majority of tasks being done by humans. There has been a massive incline towards automating simple tasks
such
 that there won't be any human interaction and things getting done more accurately.
This
 essay discusses various job positions lost because of
computers
 and the problems that may incur because of
this
 situation.
Firstly
, one of the major situations
where manpower is replaced
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, where manpower is replaced,
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 is in the factories and industries. Previously most of the work used to be done by
people
 like the packaging of goods, lifting items, transporting raw material between machines, etc. But now most of these things are replaced by the assembly line innovation where machines carry out the tasks done by humans resulting in increased performance of the industries.
For example
, one
such
industry
 which recently transformed into an assembly line is the Parle
industry
.
This
industry
 has replaced the regular work done by humans
to
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 assembly lines resulting in the dismissal of few employees.
Secondly
, another field where
people
 are replaced with
computers
 is in the
software
industry
. The boom of automation has hit is
software
industry
 very hard that many manual
jobs
 have been replaced by automated
software
.
For example
, in TCS there is a ticketing tool used to solve customer queries. Now they have developed an automated system where all the queries are answered automatically through
software
 resulting in the loss of almost 10000
jobs
. The main problem for
this
 kind of transformation is unemployment. Many
people
 depend on simple
jobs
 and they run their families based on these salaries. With
computers
 taking over these
jobs
, they tend to get unemployed and lose their survival income. To overcome these situations
people
 should always upgrade their skills so that they have demand in the latest technologies happening in the world. To conclude, the computer boom has caused many problems to low skilled workers as they their occupation to automation. To overcome
this
 problem
people
 always need to update themselves as per the latest requirements.
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