Restoration of old buildings in main cities involves enormous government expenditure. It would be more beneficial to spend this money to build new houses and roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is a great financial undertaking, requiring funds that could be spent elsewhere. Whilst it is important

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new housing and roads in

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, I don’t think

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should be at the expense of maintaining and renovating our old

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. Our old

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are a link to the past, part of our cultural heritage. Replacing old

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not only ruins the aesthetics of our

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but means some architectural styles will be lost forever.

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, these

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are important for our younger and future generations to learn about the past and a source of enjoyment as people revel in their diverse and often pleasing architecture.

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, these

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tourist attractions. They bring tourists into

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, benefitting the wider community and contributing funding to their maintenance.

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contributes to the countries economies and

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a burden to city spending budgets.

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, many people actively raise funds for these

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and

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should be widely publicised to encourage more members of the local community to get involved in preserving their heritage.

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, we cannot deny that our

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are expanding rapidly as more people move for either work or relocate from other countries. We

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need new housing and effective transport systems.

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should be carefully considered to avoid turning our

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into ugly concrete jungles, maybe emanating the styles of the old architecture we have in place.

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, care should be taken that the plans consider the environmental impacts so as not to damage our environment. Overall, I think money should be spent to maintain old

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. We need to see the bigger picture, old

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bring in revenue, so we should assess their value to our local economies. They are our heritage and should be maintained and new developments should complement our diverse architecture.