Some people think that because children find subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult, they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

The Curriculum for schools has evolved to a certain extent that some
students
find it difficult to understand(
for example
maths or philosophy). Some people believe that it will be better if these
subjects
were made optional rather than compulsory.
This
essay will address both these statements and my opinion on the same. To start with, It is important for all
students
to get at least a chance to get an understanding of what a particular
subject
is about.One advantage of having the
subjects
optional is that the children will not feel the burden of that
subject
and
hence
can focus on the
subjects
that he enjoys learning.
For example
, a student that doesn't
likes
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However
, due to no flexibility provided in
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, he still has to do the math.
This
might affect grades for other
subjects
or
students
might not be able to focus well on other
subjects
. On the other side, One of the major
disadvantage
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optional is that it might cause unnecessary stress to some of the children.As all children cannot handle the pressure
that is
caused by the
subject
that he/she
dont
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don't
doesn't
want to learn.
For example
, consider a child that likes art but
instead
of art, he/she is forced to attend philosophy class. So in
this
case it may happen that he/she may start bunking other classes and roam outside of school.
This
will lead to some other scenario altogether. So in a nutshell, In my opinion, it is necessary for
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to include a hybrid model
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students
can get to decide their curriculum.
This
will not only escalate
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of
students
more towards their
subject
but
also
it will be beneficial for
school
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to get their global rankings high.
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