Some people think that because children find subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult, they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?
The Curriculum for schools has evolved to a certain extent that some
students
find it difficult to understand(for example
maths or philosophy). Some people believe that it will be better if these subjects
were made optional rather than compulsory. This
essay will address both these statements and my opinion on the same.
To start with, It is important for all students
to get at least a chance to get an understanding of what a particular subject
is about.One advantage of having the subjects
optional is that the children will not feel the burden of that subject
and hence
can focus on the subjects
that he enjoys learning. For example
, a student that doesn't likes
to apply math. Change the verb form
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However
, due to no flexibility provided in curriculum
, he still has to do the math. Correct article usage
the curriculum
This
might affect grades for other subjects
or students
might not be able to focus well on other subjects
.
On the other side, One of the major disadvantage
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for
not making Change preposition
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the subject
subject
optional is that it might cause unnecessary stress to some of the children.As all children cannot handle the pressure Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
that is
caused by the subject
that he/she dont
want to learn. Correct your spelling
don't
doesn't
For example
, consider a child that likes art but instead
of art, he/she is forced to attend philosophy class. So in this
case it may happen that he/she may start bunking other classes and roam outside of school. This
will lead to some other scenario altogether.
So in a nutshell, In my opinion, it is necessary for Add an article
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schools
where
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students
can get to decide their curriculum.This
will not only escalate interest
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the interest
students
more towards their subject
but also
it will be beneficial for school
to get their global rankings high.Fix the agreement mistake
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