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These days Internet has brought a revolution in the world. what are the advantages and disadvantages of internet?

#internet #revolution #world
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internet
 takes over the world.
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are
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 much connected to the technology so
internet
 plays a
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crucial
 role.
Internet
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 allows people to explore the world,
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 their problems and
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internet
ineternet
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also
 helps in gaining knowledge.
Internet
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 provides
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perfect information
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information
 about everything so
internet
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the internet
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 plays a major role in
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 era. Coming through
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positives
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internet
 helps one to gather required
information
 and
also
 share known
information
to
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 others.
Internet
 helps the students to collect the
information
 for their projects and
latest
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ideas
of
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 making a project.Through
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internet
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 we can
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 find tips for
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 lifestyle and way of living.
Internet
 is much useful to everyone to explore,gain new
ideas
 and
also
 helps for
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. Every good has some bad.
Internet
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also
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 many disadvantages like it kills new
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 and thinking ability means if get addicted to it we lack
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in thinking
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 out of
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 example,if a student doing a project and he copies
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 from
intenet
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internet
 he surely gets good grades but zero knowledge and he has no
imrovement
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improvement
 in his thinking and his
ideas
.Everything gets easy
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internet
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 so people stop working hard to
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achieve
 things. so concluding
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 topic
internet
 can be a revolution in the world but everyone should understand that
internet
also
give
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 much bad impact to the society.
internet
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 makes people lazy and
destroy
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 their thinking ability.So one can use
internet
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the internet
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 but only to some
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extent
extinct
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • revolution
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • easy access
  • information
  • communication
  • online shopping
  • banking
  • entertainment
  • multimedia
  • online learning
  • education
  • global connectivity
  • addiction
  • time-wasting
  • privacy
  • security concerns
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • health issues
  • digital divide
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